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31 January 2011 @ 03:53 pm
Like Mist In The Sun ( Prompt UP )  
Title: Like Mist In The Sun
Words: 100
Rating: PG
Author’s Notes: First drabble. Be honest. Please


Among the debris of Hogwarts, she was. Dirty and bruised, her clothes torn.
The sunlight lit up her hair, the dust around her like mist in the sun. To Harry, she had never been more beautiful.
She came towards him, running. The hair and the dress in the wind.
And Harry kissed her.
The scent of flowers mixed with smoke and sweat, overwhelmed him. I will not leave you anymore! He wanted to scream. But his voice was blocked, suppressed by so many emotions. His heart was beating so much as to threaten to climb up, up, up, to the sky.
 
 
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Current Mood: nervousnervous
 
 
 
pingback_botpingback_bot on January 31st, 2011 04:21 pm (UTC)
January 31, 2011: Issue 162
User ladywhizbee referenced to your post from January 31, 2011: Issue 162 saying: [...] by . [R/Hr –PG-13] - Like Mist in the Sun [...]
Graceginny88 on January 31st, 2011 04:32 pm (UTC)
Beautiful, this is how it should be in canon.
Teraterachan on January 31st, 2011 07:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I don't know if it is as it should be canon, but that's how I imagine it.
EMMIE: holding_youracing_rain on February 1st, 2011 10:48 am (UTC)
Oh, this is beautiful. Really. And with the way you worded it, I actually read it like I was reciting a poem. :D Wonderful work.
Teraterachan on February 1st, 2011 11:12 am (UTC)
Thanks. It was the the first time I post something, so I was very nervous. I'm glad you like it. Maybe this will convince me to post more.
danfan74danfan74 on February 6th, 2011 02:46 pm (UTC)
you most definitely should post more. I like this. very beautiful, very descriptive.
Teraterachan on February 6th, 2011 05:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I definitely plan to post more.
pingback_botpingback_bot on February 10th, 2011 04:43 am (UTC)
February 6, 2011:Issue 163
User julieweasely referenced to your post from February 6, 2011:Issue 163 saying: [...] by anonymous[H/G,other canon pairs-R] Drabbles: Like Mist in the sun [...]
alita258alita258 on February 19th, 2011 10:43 pm (UTC)
It's awesome how you capture so beautifully the moment of their reunion. I could picture it in my head.
Teraterachan on February 19th, 2011 10:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks, this is my first drabble and my favorite ^^
loonynamelassloonynamelass on March 28th, 2011 12:28 am (UTC)
Aw- all that pent up longing for her, 10 months long, can finally give itself up. He can finally lay down the mantle and stop sacrificing happiness for happiness. The war is over and he can declare it in the purest way.

And conveniently chase away any prospective fan-girls in the process. After all, he killed the Dark Lord! *swoon*
Tera: Harry/Ginny Kissterachan on March 28th, 2011 10:56 am (UTC)
Yeah. I wish that Rowling had shown us their reconciliation.

Poor Harry. He deserved it.

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Tera: Harry/Ginnyterachan on March 31st, 2011 06:31 am (UTC)
Thanks :)